Favor intent and impact over cause
Also it’s the real difference people that are many between erotica and porn. That difference doesn’t make a difference much in terms of art – the very fact continues to be, saying whoever supply is when and what some one has been doing due to their earlobe is not likely getting the reader’s pulse racing.
May possibly not be correct that your reader desires to be when you look at the scene, but it needs to speak to emotional, rather than physical, realities for it to have impact.
But how will you compose an intercourse scene without describing movement that is physical? Well, to begin with, you are able to explain action and movemen – it simply shouldn’t function as the focus. As Anais Nin claims, it is technical, and mechanics alone are boring.
Intercourse loses all its power and secret whenever it becomes explicit, mechanical, overdone, whenever it becomes an obsession that is mechanistic. It turns into a bore. You’ve got taught us a lot more than anybody i am aware exactly how incorrect it isn’t to combine it with feeling, hunger, desire, lust, whims, caprices, personal ties, much much deeper relationships which change its color, taste, rhythms, intensities.
Perhaps you are convinced that colorful description could be the solution, but that too can destroy any erotic interest the audience could be harboring. Morrissey’s variety of the Lost could be the receiver of Literary Review’s Bad Intercourse in Fiction Award partly due to the bizarre language it falls straight straight back on to try to justify real description. Continue reading “Explaining the physical realities of intercourse is hardly ever erotic”